Welcome to My Portfolios Page!
Revised by: 09110
Date: 2011.01.10
This Portfolios is my result of effort that how I did my best. You can find that I reached to 15,000 words and more. I tried to post a lot as can as possible. As the result, I reached to 15,000 words. I thought I couldn't write more than the first semester but I could!
0.0. Proto-Portfolios
Reflections on Proto-Portfolios
I posted as many words as I can for one post. There are many expressions that I didn't know and I couldn't make myself in English. I felt that it's not enough for me to study so I tried to write all things in English though I can't make sence sufficiently. Thanks to that, I have more confidence than before. As you can see, my English has been changing than before and also, my typing speed certainly became faster than the first semester. I also tried to post with graphics so you I can tell more clearly.2.0. 2nd Semester Portfolio
Here's the PPF for the 2nd semester. PPF are for essays and book reviews.
2.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
My best essay is Essay 2-03b. The reasons are I could implant the reply to all comments. The other reason is I could write what I wanted to say.
Overall Essay Developments
I could write more words for essays than before. I also tried to make the sentence longer with some grammars.
2.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
My best book review ia BR 2-11: Mr.Bean. The reasons are I like Mr.Bean and I explained my favorite scenes.
Overall Book Review Developments
I think my speed to read books became faster than before. It took so much time when I started book review at first but now, I don't take so much time reading books.
2.3. Additional Highlights and Reflections
[Suggest other aspects of your writing this year that you feel are or have been especially important, and explain briefly why you think so. If possible, point out specific examples of work on your blog or spreadsheets that show what you feel is important for portfolio reviewers to consider.]
1.0. 1st Semester Portfolio
This Portfolio is about my essays. You can see how many words I wrote for the essays, comments and so on.
1.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
My best essay is 1-02b. There are two reasons why I chose that. The first reason is that this essay is completely original. I did search on the Internet and I made it. It took more than 3 hours and so tired but I felt a sense of achievement so I am happy with this essay and this is my best essay. The second reason is that I explained easily for people who read my essay. Rowing is unusual sport so it's difficult to understand about rowing for everyone who doesn't know rowing. The explanations were easy to read and understand.Essay 1-02b: I love rowing!!
Overall Essay Developments
At first, I didn't like doing essays because I didn't understand but now, I like essays and it is interesting to write about my favorite things so words get longer than before now. I think you can find it if you check my essay 1-02b.However, I copied for the essay 1-02a when I did for the first time. I was misunderstanding. I feel sorry for the teachers about that. I'm reflecting on myself now.
My essay became easily to read and understand using graphics and mind-map.
1.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
My best book review is 1-11. Why I think so is that I summarized well and didn't copy any words. I read and understood about the story and also, I wrote about myself (my opinion).BR 1-11: Lucky Number
Overall Book Review Developments
I couldn't do book review regularly after April but I did all 13 book reviews. At first, I was just writting short summarize and long my opinion. However, I wrote well-length summarize and my opinion.One more thing that I think is that it was a good opportunity to read English book because I seldom read English books. My reading speed became faster and now I got to read easily.
2.0. 2nd Semester Portfolio
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